It's not completely bad, but you really need to fix those synths -- they're both out of tune with the piano part. After doing that you should add a bassline to give it a fuller sound. The synth is also a little harsh in my opinion. Try putting a filter on it or modifying it's waveform to make it easier to listen to?
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